It looks to me like you are going down the wrong path here. The DMR typically references specification documents and QMS procedures. For example, if your device was made of two plastic pieces assembled together, your DMR would reference the specification number of the first plastic piece, the specification number of the second plastic piece, and the manufacturing procedures for assembly and test. If you were to show me the specification document for the first plastic piece. It would have all information on the material, dimensions, how to inspect it, etc. Basically all the info would be there that you could provide this drawing to a molding house, and they could make it for you. The DMR is the recipe of the device and through the DMR, there should be a connection on every detail on how to make it.
What you have looks more like design inputs and design input requirements. These are critical elements of design control. Contrast this to DMR items, which are critical elements of manufacturing production.