Re: My Class Assignment on Quality Assurance Gurus for Your Review - Help needed
Hello Anna. Thanks for posting back. This has been a "lively" thread this week, and wanted to make sure we didn't overload you.
You referred to answering two questions. What would those questions be?
As far as vocabulary and using big words-welcome to a big club!

Lots of people do that all the time. I might suggest a trade-off in your paper. For third year student, I would maybe push for simpler wording and better citations. You might even want to mention the tools that made each famous.
Now, I understand the desire to save time. Saying, it's way easier to read things on the Internet and cite than read the books on it.
1. If you are a third year engineering student, you are used to putting in some hours studying!

Take a break from Diff. Equations and the like and read some about Quality Philosophy.
2. This is your education that you are paying for. Make it count. Reading in a little more authoritative books gives you so much more color and history for each person. Wiki is great, but anyone can write things there, and put their own spin on it.
As Stijloor stated, I know we have given you a lot. When you get a chance, let us know what your plan is for a rewrite.
College was so discouraging many times for me because no one would take the time to help me; to show me how to do things. So I figured I would give you a few things to help out.
Also, there is another thread going as we speak-
need help of a person who was "thrown" into a quality position with no training, support, etc. It's important that current college-age individuals understand quality and the different approaches to it. Even if you go into management, it is all the more important to understand that it takes a commitment to realize a return from quality.